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Subject: BIOEXAMPLE
Examples of Good and Bad Bios: Acceptable: Project/ -Kato- Subject/Race/ -Biodroid- Data/ *processing* Type/ Document Uploading files ==searching=== Files: -located- Downloaded]--- 2 part: select 1,2 Selecting 1...The subject male, tests seem to be failing to develop more efficient ways to use his energy to develop higher use of his power. These tests have been going on for quite some time. Nothing seems to be working, we are loosing funds and cash has just gone down. The only things we have noticed are brain wave pattern changes, radical ones never seen before. We have given him techniques such as the kamehameha beam wave, special beam cannon, and many others. This (his brainwave patterns) seems to be the key to his power or so we think. Although our patient is in a stasis suspended animation pod, he seems to have well, to put it simply sleep talk. He keeps repeating mind and something called "spir"? The project has failed but I dare not tell my superiors. I have thought about waking the patient but instead I've decided to just terminate the project and make it look like an accident. On a more personal note something about this patient scares me it's almost like He's...watching me. End File::: Selecting 2...Downloading]---- File: -located- Type: Document/Audio New changes have been appearing very sporadically in the subject, nearly every day. We have been experiencing power booms where it seems he has massive power increases which cause the whole facility to shake. Truly amazing is his brainwaves show he is wide-awake but his body is in a deep sleep. Something just happened. His eyes are open! *****Initializing Audio*** Voice: 1 "What just happened!!!" Voice: 2 "I'm not sure sir, his power is off the chart!" Kato: "wh..whe.whewhere am I..?" Voice: 2 "Ummsir!, what do we do..!?!?" Voice: 1 "calm down, Kato I see you are awake, are you o..k?" Kato: "Who are you?!" Voice: 1 "why Kato dont you remember?, you signed up for this experiment?":: reaches for Kato:: Kato: "I...I..dont remember anything, Just get away from me!!!!!!!!" ::you hear a beam of energy flow from his hand:: the beam sounds as if it tears straight through the man Voice: 1 "grkagrr" Voice: 2 "AHhh!! stay away from me" Kato: "Let me out!!!, :screams out in rage:" [background noise sounds as if the ground broke loose] ++explosion++ End of clip:.. ((((WARNING)))) **malfunction**** ]]]]DELETED[[[[ End of program. Unacceptable: I was born in a small town. I own the hell out of people. I killed both my parents at an early age. I was moved to an asylum at 11. I am a mutant! Obviously the acceptable one goes above the call of duty in terms of a bio, but it is original and gives a good rough background for the character. Your bios need to be spell checked and grammar checked, or you will be notified of the errors and just waste the Immortal's time. To have your bio looked at, simply ask over the OOC channel for an Immortal to glance over it.

Subject: BIOEXAMPLE

Examples of Good and Bad Bios:
Acceptable:
Project/ -Kato- Subject/Race/ -Biodroid- Data/ ***processing*** Type/ Document
Uploading files ==searching=== Files: -located- Downloaded]---
2 part: select 1,2 Selecting 1...The subject male, tests seem to be failing
to develop more efficient ways to use his energy to develop higher use of
his power. These tests have been going on for quite some time. Nothing seems
to be working, we are loosing funds and cash has just  gone down. The only
things we have noticed are brain wave pattern changes, radical ones never seen
before. We have given him techniques such as the kamehameha beam wave, special
beam cannon, and many  others.  This (his brainwave patterns) seems to be the
key to his  power or so we think. Although our patient is in a stasis suspended
animation pod, he seems to have well, to put it simply sleep talk. He keeps
repeating mind and something called "spir"? The project has failed but I dare
not tell my superiors. I have thought about waking the patient but instead
I've decided to just terminate the project and make it look like an accident.
On a more personal note something about this patient scares me it's almost like
He's...watching me.
End File:::
Selecting 2...Downloading]---- File: -located-
Type: Document/Audio
New changes have been appearing very sporadically in the subject, nearly
every day. We have been experiencing power booms where it seems he has massive
power increases which cause the whole facility to shake. Truly amazing is his
brainwaves show he is wide-awake but his body is in a deep sleep. Something
just happened. His eyes are open! *******Initializing Audio******* Voice: 1
"What just happened!!!" Voice: 2 "I'm not sure sir, his power is off the chart!"
Kato: "wh..whe.whewhere am I..?" Voice: 2 "Ummsir!, what do we do..!?!?" Voice:
1 "calm down, Kato I see you are awake, are you o..k?" Kato: "Who are you?!"
Voice: 1 "why Kato dont you remember?, you signed up for this experiment?"::
reaches for Kato:: Kato: "I...I..dont remember anything, Just get away from
me!!!!!!!!" ::you hear a beam of energy flow from his hand:: **the beam sounds
as if it tears straight through the man** Voice: 1 "grkagrr" Voice: 2 "AHhh!!
stay away from me" Kato: "Let me out!!!, :screams out in rage:" [background
noise sounds as if the ground broke loose] ++explosion++ End of clip:..
((((WARNING)))) ******malfunction******        ]]]]DELETED[[[[   End of
program.
Unacceptable:
I was born in a small town. I own the hell out of people. I killed both my parents at an early age. I was moved to an asylum at 11. I am a mutant!
Obviously the acceptable one goes above the call of duty in terms of a bio, but it is 
original and gives a good rough background for the character. Your bios need to be spell
checked and grammar checked, or you will be notified of the errors and just waste the
Immortal's time.
To have your bio looked at, simply ask over the OOC channel for an Immortal to glance 
over it.